Nicely done! I can't wait to follow along with Elsie and Jack. What an adventure! But also... I need to find out more about this Gundula. haha. Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Thank you so much Helena. I’m so glad that Elsie, and Jack, resonate. This is a scene from the first draft which I’m still working on. Gundula is Elsie’s nemesis at work and Jack really is a stunner! But I’m miles off finishing it, so a lot might still change. It’s nice to have you back 😊
I have roughly planned it out, but I’m only at the beginning of Act 2 in my first draft and Elsie, Jack and Meredith might still surprise me, who knows. Plus there is the past timeline in the 1950s which might throw things a bit. We’ll see. But thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. It means everything 🤗❤️
Yes! 👏🏼 TEAM JACK!! Lars and Sue will understand I’m sure 💓 love that she’s going towards adventure! Cannot wait to enjoy more of this, beautifully written 💓 xx
Yay, thank you Ally!! This makes my day. I was a bit nervous about posting something from my actual novel. There is LOTS of adventure ahead for Elsie. This is only the beginning… I’m glad you like it 😅
Nicely done! I can't wait to follow along with Elsie and Jack. What an adventure! But also... I need to find out more about this Gundula. haha. Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Thank you so much Helena. I’m so glad that Elsie, and Jack, resonate. This is a scene from the first draft which I’m still working on. Gundula is Elsie’s nemesis at work and Jack really is a stunner! But I’m miles off finishing it, so a lot might still change. It’s nice to have you back 😊
Oooh I love a work nemesis. Hooked already! Good luck with the drafting. :-)
I love this, Helene. Consider me intrigued!
Thank you Ana, I am so relieved it resonates. First time a part of my novel had an outing 😅
That takes guts! It's really good. I'd love to see where this story goes.
I have roughly planned it out, but I’m only at the beginning of Act 2 in my first draft and Elsie, Jack and Meredith might still surprise me, who knows. Plus there is the past timeline in the 1950s which might throw things a bit. We’ll see. But thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. It means everything 🤗❤️
Anytime! Keep up the great work. 👏🩷
Yes! 👏🏼 TEAM JACK!! Lars and Sue will understand I’m sure 💓 love that she’s going towards adventure! Cannot wait to enjoy more of this, beautifully written 💓 xx
Yay, thank you Ally!! This makes my day. I was a bit nervous about posting something from my actual novel. There is LOTS of adventure ahead for Elsie. This is only the beginning… I’m glad you like it 😅
Ooooh you tease us so!! Thank you for the sneaky peek 👀 happy writing ✍🏼 ♥️ xx
Love this, Helene! I hope you post more!